You have created some wonderful suspense Kaitlyn. It has created a build up to getting sun burnt, well done!
Hi it is Hannah love your poem you really described how wonderful summer is!
Kaitlyn what a poem its the bomb and Im not joking you are a wounderful poem writer now keep it up
Paula Stewart | November 24, 2010 at 5:20 PM
You have created some wonderful suspense Kaitlyn. It has created a build up to getting sun burnt, well done!
Hannah | December 1, 2010 at 7:52 PM
Hi it is Hannah love your poem you really described how wonderful summer is!
simone rocks (me) | December 4, 2010 at 4:08 PM
Kaitlyn what a poem its the bomb and Im not joking you are a wounderful poem writer now keep it up