Last Saturday the Prime Minister was very worried because it was very hot in Tranilaen and the last bottle of powerade was empty. The Prime Minister had to go to the Dark Museum to find some more, but he got lost in the darkest part, the Egyptian Display. He didn’t come back.
Mean while back in Tranilaen the two Vice Prime Ministers were fighting over who would be the new Prime Minister. But when the ghost of the old Prime Minister came back it scared the living daylights out of them. They ran, and ran till no one saw them again.
A year later the town started to crumble and everybody turned into ghosts and they renamed the town “Ghost Town”. Everybody lived happily ever after... opps I meant everyghost lived happily ever after.
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7 years ago
Unknown | June 23, 2010 at 4:13 PM
I liked your adjectives in this story. It was an interesting name of your town. How did they die?
Unknown | June 24, 2010 at 4:03 PM
I like your story Aleisha. I hope this doesnt happen to our Prime Ministers!!! From Jaimee
The White Family | July 19, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Hi' Aleisha it's sophie here,
I was just wanting to say that I like how your
story flows well and it joins together nicely!
COOL STORY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BY SOPHIE W